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Lilly
It's 2006. The political climate in China is very unstable. When ANNA, the young pregnant wife
of an outspoken journalist is left widowed after a vicious assassination, friends whisk her out of
the country to sympathetic expatriates in Queens, New York.
In Queens she's given a grim room in the local syndicate head quarters. Anna is lethargic, lost
in pain. JON VAN, the charming head of the syndicate comes to see how she's doing, and
expresses romantic interest in her. Anna's lack of enthusiasm angers him, but he writes it off to
her recent experiences.
Lost in shock and grief, Anna, is placed with JUNE, another widow, who has adjusted to the
new life. They share a run-down apartment in a maze of tenement buildings, serviced by a few
small markets in a bad part of town. June runs the local daycare center for the working mothers
in this closed Vietnamese community.
Anna, now seven months pregnant, is speechless and depressed until early labor forces a
bone-chilling howl of pain from her parched lips. The baby is born, Lily, a perfect little girl, but
Anna is too deeply distressed to bond.
It's June who holds the tiny girl, and cuddles her.
As the weeks pass, Anna slowly recovers. She starts to ask questions about the new world
she's entered. Anna sees the mothers drop off and pick up their children, tension and fear in
their faces.When Anna asks why there is so much stress, June explains that everyone owes the
syndicate, the local arm of the people who helped Anna escape. Jon Van is the boss.
June reveals her hatred of the syndicate, telling Anna of their exploitation of their own kind.
"That's why I make so little money, Anna, half of it goes back to them. That's why everyone's
afraid, they use threats of deportation or death to keep us in line."Anna denies this, insisting that
since the syndicate saved her life and the life of her daughter, June must be exaggerating.
June helps Anna improve her English, warning her to keep it a secret. Their nightly practice
bonds them together like sisters. But as time passes, June becomes more and more depressed
and decides to run away. Anna feels for June, but warns her that it's wrong to flee. Late one
night, June tries to escape. She's caught and is beaten to death.
Horrified at the death of her only friend, Anna's emotional agony returns and she takes refuge in
her relationship with Lily. When Lily wants to know about her father, Anna makes up a wild
story. She tells Lily her daddy was a famous patriot, who died to save her and many others
from the oppression in their country. When Lily asks if he's really dead, Anna hasn't the heart to
confirm the truth. She pretends that there's a big secret. She tells Lily that Daddy really
escaped and came to America, where he is searching for them everywhere.
This fantasy helps Anna to resolve her trauma over the death of her beloved husband and she
begins to mend. Jon Van visits, and puts her to work. She takes over June's former duties and
runs the local daycare center.
Jon Van lays down the rules: traditional food, dress and language. No English in the home, no
western clothes, no contact with TV. Jon Van makes his usual pass, but Anna only looks at him
with scorn.
Five years later.
Anna's daughter, Lily, is ready to go to school. On her first day, she's made fun of and returns
home in tears. She begs her mother to teach her English and buy her regular American clothes.
Lily's daily humiliation at school upsets Anna. She goes to Jon Van and asks that her daughter
be allowed to wear American clothes and learn English.
Jon Van warns her to stop this revolt, reminding her of her illegal status. When she argues, he
reminds her about what happened to June. He then offers to help Lily if Anna will respond to his
advances.
Defeated and repelled, Anna returns home, realizing that June had told her the truth.
The months pass, and Lily continues to attend school. Every day, she comes home crying. Lily
becomes a faint shadow of her former cheerful self.
Anna can only attempt to comfort her. The only cure is a new story about Dad.
Anna's helplessness turns to anger and depression, and she neglects her work and this causes
her to lose her day care center.
Jon Van appears with his usual request, but Anna resists. She pleads with him to give her more
time to respond to him, and to give her a job.
Meanwhile, after a rash of local thefts, the regular collector, another woman, is attacked and
robbed.
Jon Van asks Anna to collect the deposits from the local stores and put them in the bank. She
does this gratefully, and without question.
After a few months of doing this work, it's Lily's birthday. Anna steals the daily deposit and buys
Lily American clothes and a gold necklace.
Meanwhile the thefts continue throughout the neighborhood.
When Jon Van confronts Anna about the missing money, she pretends the thief has attacked
her.
Jon Van believes her, offers her safety in exchange for sexual favors. Again, Anna rebuffs him.
She realizes that Jon Van was hoping this would happen, and it makes her even more
determined not to give in to him.
DANIEL, the thief, burgles one more store, and is caught by the enforcers of the syndicate.
They drag him to an alley and try to beat him to death. Ankle broken, severely wounded, he
manages to escape into the maze of tenements.
Daniel breaks into Anna's apartment and hides. Anna is out collecting, and Lily is in school. He
finds the necklace and pockets it.
Lily returns from school. She finds Daniel, and assumes he's her long lost father, just returned
from a new adventure. Daniel's touched by her innocent acceptance and cannot hurt her.
Anna returns. She's appalled to find Daniel in her house, alone with her daughter. She's about
to turn him into the syndicate, when Lily joyously announces how happy she is to have found
her father at last.
He's so badly beaten that he's not even a threat, and so, Anna doesn't have the heart to destroy
Lily's joy. They have a little party, and Daniel and Anna pretend that the necklace is from her
"father."
Anna is overwhelmed to see her little girl finally happy.
They continue to enact this uncomfortable charade until Lily leaves for school the next day.
Finally alone with him, Anna tells Daniel to get out. He refuses. She threatens to call the
syndicate. He threatens to tell Lily he's not her father. Anna realizes that she will be accused of
harboring a suspect. She asks Daniel what he wants. Daniel tells her that all he wants is a
chance to recover and the get the hell away from there. Anna says she will let him stay if he will
maintain the lie. Daniel agrees.
That night the charade continues. Daniel teaches Lily some cool English words and how to fight
back. There is as much tenderness between them as though he were her real father. Anna is
upset at the situation, but Lily goes to sleep, happy in the lie.
As the days pass, Lily and Daniel grow closer and closer. Lily changes and becomes more
secure and out going.
After Lily leaves for school, Anna and Daniel talk. As the time passes, the conversation
becomes more personal. Anna realizes they have a lot in common. She softens and takes care
of him.
Daniel wants to know who beat him so badly. Anna tells him about the syndicate.
Anna goes to the stores to collect the deposits. Friends warn her that the syndicate has found
out that she bought the necklace.
She runs home and asks Daniel for help. He sees the poverty she lives in and demands to
know where she got the money for Lily's gift. She tells him, commenting that they're both
thieves.
Daniel realizes the danger Anna has placed Lily in, and tells her they must get Lily from school.
They arrive in time to see Lily kidnapped on the way home by the syndicate. They pursue, but
cannot follow inside the syndicate headquarters.
Daniel takes Anna to stay with his friends. He agrees to help her find Lily. They decide to turn
the tables on the syndicate and break them up. The question is how?
He and his friends are former soldiers, now fallen on hard times. They plan an elaborate
scheme to break in and rescue Lily.
Anna must go in to the head quarters alone and face Jon Van. She pretends to be ready to give
in to his advances in exchange for Lily, and they go to bed.
Daniel breaks in with his team. A firefight ensues.
Daniel rescues Lily, but is shot down. As he dies, he tells Anna he was happy his life added up
to something after all.
Now Anna must save her own daughter, and kill Jon Van.
She meets the challenge, leaving the syndicate shattered behind her.
With new resolve and confidence, Anna takes over the syndicate, but brings prosperity and a
new modern tradition into the community. She never tells Lily that Daniel, the thief, wasn't her
father.
© 2007 Marilyn Horowitz
About Marilyn Horowitz
Marilyn Horowitz is an award-winning New York University professor, author, producer, and Manhattan-based writing consultant, who works with successful novelists, produced screenwriters, and award-winning filmmakers. She has a passion for helping novices get started. Since 1998 she has taught thousands of aspiring screenwriters to complete a feature length screenplay using her method. She is also a judge for the Fulbright Scholarship Program for film and media students. In 2004 she received the coveted New York University Award for Teaching Excellence.
Professor Horowitz has created a revolutionary system that yields a new, more effective way of writing. She is the author of six books that help the writer learn her trademarked writing system, including editions for college, high school, and middle school. The college version is a required text at New York University and the University of California, Long Beach.
Professor Horowitz has written several feature-length screenplays. Her production credits include the feature films And Then Came Love (2007). Her new novel, The Book of Zev is available on Amazon.
